[漫画系学生日记2]

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这个好像没有太就更新,所以先更新一下。下面是

单元2的功课(教程小册子——一张纸版本)


单元3——动作镜头


然后就是为以下剧本画一个6张纸漫画

City In The Desert (这个其实是个真的漫画,不过我没看过所以不知道它说什么)Script

翻译

Page1

  1. Panel1 – A winged-flame burns alone in a sea of darkness. “When Iriaze first kindled his great flame...”一团像翅膀展开的火焰在一片黑暗中燃烧。 “当Iriaze第一次把他的火焰点燃……”

  2. Panel2- The flame illuminates the desert, trees, animals, and a single human are standing in awe. “All the things of this world were brought to light.”火焰照亮了沙漠和为动物照明。其中有个人目瞪口呆的站在它面前。“火焰为世上所有事物带来光明。”

Page2

  1. Panel1- A human stands confidently basking in light. “First among them was man, cleverest of creatures and most like his creator.”那人自信的沐浴在火光之中。“第一个是像创造者的人类” 

  2. Panel2- The man relaxes while dangerous animals look at him curiously. “Iriaze would allow no harm to come to him.”那人在所有动物好奇的看着他时休息。“Iriaze不会让他(人类)受到伤害。” 

  3. Panel3- The man warms his hands on a cooking fire, surrounded by bones of a mighty deer. “But man disobeyed Iriaze...” “DID YOU KILL MY GOLDEN DEER?” “...no”人在炉火面前取暖,围着他是神鹿的骨头。“但人类违反了Iriaze的意志……”"汝等是否杀了吾辈的金鹿?"“……没有啊。” 

  4. Panel4- The light is snuffed out and man is shocked. “And was cast out into darkness”火焰的熄灭把人类吓倒了。“之后便给黑暗囚禁” 

Page3

  1. Panel1- A demon leaps upon man, biting his shoulder. “In the great darkness, the evil one, who had always been jealous of man, seized him and hoped to feed upon his brains.”一只恶魔像人飞扑去,在他肩膀咬下去。“在黑暗中,邪恶的生物常常妒嫉人类,这样抓住他希望能够把所有的知识据为己有。” 

  2. Panel2- The man pushes the demon's head downward. “But man was stronger than the evil one expected.” “And so they fought for many days and nights...”那人把恶魔的头轰到地面。“但人类比邪恶强,于是他们便日打夜打…… ” 

  3. Panel3- Both figures are locked together wounded and struggling.“Until the earth was awash with blood and splintered bone, and no one could tell what belonged to whom.”两个伤痕累累的扭打在一起"直到世界一片血色和满地骸骨,双方也不知道到底哪些是属于自己。" 

Page4

  1. Panel1- The winged flame parts the darkness, man and demon stare up in mid-combat.“Then Iriaze, seeing how hard man was fighting, took pity on him...”那翅膀般的火焰从中间分开在战斗中的人和恶魔。”然后Iriaze给人类这么顽强,大发慈悲……“

  2. Panel2- Man and demon are pulled in opposite directions by giant burning hands.“And separated them.”两者给巨大,满是火焰的手拉开。“把他们分开。” 

  3. Panel3- The evil one is dragged away, man clutches his wounds looking confused. 邪恶的给带走,人类一脸懵逼的按住伤口。

Page5

  1. Panel1- Man stands rejoicing, casting a long shadow. “Then man said: “Praise be to Iriaze! Now everything will be as it was before!”然后人类起来欢恩,在火光前留下长长的阴影。“人类说:‘赞美Iriaze!现在一切也会一如过去!’

  2. Panel2- The burning hand points at the gore spilled on the ground, as it bubbles and drips upward. “But Iriaze said: “NO. IT WILL NOT. I WILL MAKE YOU REMEMBER THIS DAY. BEHOLD.”火手指着满地的血肉,它们随之冒泡和往上滴。“可Iriaze说:‘不,一切不会像过去那样。吾辈会让汝等记住。看!’” 

  3. Panel3- Dangerous shapes grow from the pit of blood and spring outward. “And from the mingled blood of man and the evil one, Iriaze raised a horde of monsters.”看下去危险的形状在血肉中蔓延长出。“然后Iriaze在这混合着恶魔和人类的血肉诞生了一堆怪物。” 

Page6

  1. Panel1- Man runs from the growing darkness in panic. “I WILL LET YOU NAME ALL THE ANIMALS, BUT THESE I WILL NAME MYSELF. THEY WILL BE THE ZIANG, THE FREE ONES” “IF THEY CATCH YOU, THEY WILL KILL YOU.”人类给吓倒了,从黑暗逃离。“吾辈会让汝等命名所有动物,除了这些。吾辈叫它们为自由的ziang。如果它们找到汝,汝将会给之诸杀!” 

  2. Panel2- Man scampers away growing smaller as the beasts take shape and focus their attention on him. “REMEMBER THIS DAY AND PERSEVERE!”人越跑越慢,直到所有ziang也成型和盯着他。“记住今天和继续活下去吧!” 


大胆的尝试中二文言文呵呵,不过好像会很难…………


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